View Full Version : The Redemption of Jimmy James
MJStark
01-27-2012, 02:47 PM
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BACKSTORY
CLICK HERE (http://www.greydogsoftware.com/forum/showthread.php?t=514026)
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MJStark
01-27-2012, 02:50 PM
ISSUE#1
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Jimmy's head was pounding. He clutched at the back of his head. Man, that must have been one hell of a night out to have this bad a hangover...
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NO!!!!
Jimmy remembered what had happened, he opened his eyes, then had to check that he had because everything was the same as when his eyes were shut. He sat up quickly, banged his head hard, and slipped back into unconsciousness.
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Jimmy woke up and opened his eyes, still nothing. His forehead how throbbed in unison with the back of his skull. He reached his hands up, whatever he had banged his head on before was gone. He sat up. On the far wall he could see the outline of a door. He got up and walked towards it, his legs not feeling like his own. As he reached out to touch the door it slip aside. Jimmy blinked in the bright light
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The Detective turned
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Ahhh, good to see you up and about dear boy, three days you've laid there!
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Detective? But how?
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When you left for Ravenholme without you wards the Council notified me and asked me to keep an eye on you...
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You knew??!!!! WHY DIDN'T YOU SAVE THEM!!!!!!!
Tears welling in his eyes, Jimmy lunged at The Detective, but staggered half way to him and had to grab a console to avoid falling over.
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Calm yourself James. I am truely sorry, you must believe me when I tell you that I am devestated at the loss of Ms Hitchins & Ms Gomez. I did not detect the presence of Haemogoblin until it was too late, there was nothing I could do for them.
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But the vortex! It lead somewhere right?? Surely you've got enough gizmos in this crate to tell where they went?! They could still be alive...
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Do you think I had not thought of that? The very moment I detected the vortex I scanned it with every instrument at my disposal. Haemogoblin's Troll Magic is from a different dimension, I could not get a single reading that meant anything in the short time it was active. Ms Hitchins and Ms Gomez are gone, and knowing the troll as I do I'm afraid it won't have been somewhere pleasent. I'm so sorry I could not do more, in truth I only made it with moments to spare to save you.
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I wish you hadn't...
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Enough of that talk! You need to look to the future, lad...
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What future? Robbie's gone, I broke the Disc. My future, right now, is a life of loneliness and boredom. What am I meant to do? Go back and advise heroes on what jobs to take, knowing that without Cactus Man, Robyn & Wyllow to back them up they're all going to end up like Neutron Man?
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James, I do not say this lightly. The Disc chose you. Until your death that connection can never be severed. But you killed in anger when you should have held back, and so you can not be trusted with its powers. But you have the heart of a hero. The Disc requires redemption boy, for you to make yourself worthy of the Powers of the Disc again. You must prove, in your heart, that you will continue to fight, regardless of the Disc. You must continue to be a force for good and become one with yourself, Jimmy James, or all is lost, for all time.
A door opened in the wall and daylight streamed in. Jimmy looked outside to see his SHPD Precinct across the street.
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Time for you to go out and prove you are the hero I know you can be, Jimmy James...
The Detective pushed him out of the door, the door closed, Jimmy turned but the ship was gone.
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Jimmy staggered, jelly-legged, into the Liason Unit office. Sergeant Sandy Hyatt was on the phone, she looked up
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Freddy, I'm gonna have to call you back.
She put the phone down and rushed towards Jimmy, catching his as he began to fall to the floor. She helped him into his chair.
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Jeeezz boss, you look like s**t! Where the hell have you been?
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Ravenholme... Sulphur... Cactus Man......
He passed out.
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Jimmy woke up.
He's survived a pretty bad fall a few days ago from the looks of it, no broken bones but a couple of pretty big bumps to the head. He should get some rest, that's my advice Sergeant.
OK Doc, I'll be sure to tell him when he wakes up.
Jimmy heard footsteps walking away and the door shut.
You can open your eyes now, he's gone
Jimmy opened his eyes. He was laying on the couch in his office, although he didn't remember it having a Hello Kitty duvet or comfy pillows on it before.
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I see you've added some womanly touches while I was away.
He smiled at Sandy, she half-smiled back.
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Well, I figured as I've been here on my own for three weeks and I was only getting to spend an hour a night at home in bed I may as well not bother going back at all. So, I know you're the boss, but, seriously, where the hell have you been!!!??!!
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Ravenholme. Cactus Man and I tracked down Sulphur. Robyn and Wyllow tracked us down and we all went in together. We took down Sulphur but... something went wrong. There was another villain, a powerfull one. He sucked Robyn and Wyllow into a vortex... Cactus Man killed Sulphur, and it killed him... they're all gone.....
Jimmy began to cry. Sandy rushed over and put her arm around her boss.
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TWO WEEKS LATER
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Jimmy had spent the last couple of weeks recovering. Sandy had said she could handle things for a while longer. Besides, it seemed that with the Masters of the Underworld leaderless that things truely had calmed down in San Habbershon, at least to the point where The Union could actually handle things. But the time had come for him to return to work, so he figured he'd get back into the swing of things with a little gun practice.
*BANG* *BANGBANG* *BANG* *BANGBANGBANGBANGBANGBANG*
Jimmy pushed the target recall button and waited. While the motor whirred the gun tech wandered over.
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Seriously Detective, you aint gonna have hit it, thats the distance we set for scope training
Jimmy smiled
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We'll see...
The target shuddered to a stop
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That's $50 you owe me Jay.
Jimmy held out his hand
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Ahhhhh, errrrr.... You can wait till pay-day right?
Jimmy laughed
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Yeah, you'll keep kid.
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Hey, ya know what Detective, wait here, you'll like this...
The kid ran into his office, took a key from around his neck and unlocked a cupboard. He took out a case and ran back out.
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Take a look at this baby!
(He set the case down and opened it)
Titanium alloy, carbon fibre, the latest in sniper rifle tech.
He took the parts out and assembled the rifle. He passed it to Jimmy.
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So light...
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Yeah, but it's got the punching power of a 50cal!
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WHAT!? Seriously?
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Yeah! Now try this...
He opened a pouch in the case and pulled out what looked a bit like a head-torch. He put it on Jimmy's head, the 'torch' over his right eye. Jimmy could see straight through it
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Now touch the button on the side of the eye-piece.
Jimmy did so. Suddenly his right eye was full of a view of the floor. He raised his arm in surprise and the view skewed to look to his left. He looked at the gun.
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I can see from the gun's point of view! Awwww, this is awesome!
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It gets better! Aim the gun down the range, but dont look. See the target at the far end?
Jimmy closed his left eye
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Just...
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OK. Think zoom
Jimmy did so, and the image zoomed in. And in. And in. Until what once had been a blur of black and green filled his view.
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Now take a shot.
Jimmy pulled the trigger.
*Phhift*
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HOLY CRAP!!! There wasn't even a kick!
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I know!!!!!
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But Jay, what do we need something like that for? It's way too powerfull for police use...
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That's why they gave it to me. I'm developing a load of non-lethal rounds for it. There's a side-arm that goes with it, but it's basicly a long range ballistic tranc-dart pistol with a scope linked to the eye-piece. You hold one gun, you see through that, you hold both, you get split screen, you hold no guns...
(Jay took the rifle off him and the eye-piece cleared again)
You can override it with this button here on the grip of the rifle or the side of the eye-piece... man, I'm like a pig in s**t!!
Jimmy took the eye-piece off and gave it back to Jay.
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You sure do get some nice toys to play with kid. Anyway, I gotta go get some shut-eye kid, back in for real in the morning.
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Night Detective.
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*BEEPBEEP* *BEEPBEEP*
Jimmy hit his alarm clock
*BEEPBEEP* *BEEPBEEP*
He opened his eyes, his pager was flashing at him.
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Jimmy turned up to Sergeant Hyatt screaming down a phone
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NO, ANIMAL CONTROL CAN'T HANDLE IT!!! PUT DOWN THAT DONUT, GET OFF YOUR ASS AND GET DOWN THERE................................... I DONT CARE IF IT'S NOT YOUR DEPARTMENT'S PROBLEM...... HELLO??
She threw the phone at the wall and looked at Jimmy
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He hung up!!
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What's going on?!
She dropped into her chair and sighed
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The New Union are off shooting a Malibu Special, I think they've rigged a fake tsunami or something...
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The New Union?
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Yeah, while you were away National Goliath won the spot on the team cos he never got captured. Rook, RPM & Stupor Man are still teaming together, they got their own series. They live in a house together an everything. But that mean's that they are off filming their first show, 'The Try-Outs meet Captain Awesome'. Speed Burst couldn't cope anymore and she's taking some time away, who know's if she'll come back. I'll be honest, she took the news about Cactus Man, Robyn & Wyllow the hardest of all...
(she saw the look in Jimmy's face)
*COUGH* So all of this means I've got nobody, and we've got a gorilla with a gun running around mid-town!
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Wha??
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Yeah, remember when Rook got saved by an 'black furry beast with a gun'? Well it looks like it might be a little unstable! The beat cops are telling me its an Aminal Control job, Animal Control wont touch it. We're screwed!
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Wait... I've got an idea...
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Jimmy ran into the gun range just as Jay was locking up.
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Oh, thank god you're still here! Wanna wipe off that $50 you owe me kid?
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Jimmy lay in wait on the rooftop. Sandy had insisted he wear the swat body armour, just in case.
He aimed the rifle down into the street, still nothing
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Sandy, you're sure he's coming this way
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*Oh yes! 30 seconds away, tops...*
He strained his hearing. Her could hear screaming in the distance. He looked over the edge as it got closer. A woman ran down the street, dressing in only her underwear. As he looked up the street in the direction she had come from he heard a car's tires screech as someone slammed on their breaks. A car began reversing up the road. A black figure landed on the hoor of the car and it skidded to a halt. The driver got out and ran. The figure jumped off the hood and ripped the car door off.
Jimmy turned on the eye-piece and zoomed in
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It was obviously a massive gorilla, dressed in an army uniform with a gun, but Jimmy noticed it had an eye-piece very much like his own attached to its helmet.
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Jimmy flicked through his ammo types and went for what Jay had called the 'Big Game' Tranqs. He took aim.
*Phhitww*
He saw the ape's hand fly to his neck. It pulled out the dart, looked at it and stumbled. The ape shook it's head, and waved his gun around. When it stopped the gun was pointing right at Jimmy. Jimmy saw the ape take the cigar out of its mouth and smile.
*PUNNNCCCCCC* *PUNNNCCCCCCC*
Two Frag Grenades arced towards Jimmy's hiding place. He got up to run but was knocked down by the blast. He lay there, his leg trapped under some rubble. He could hear the ape climbing up the side of the building. He looked for his rifle, it was out of reach. He looked back, the gorilla had just hopped the edge of the building. Jimmy scrabbled for his pistol.
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Why you want hurt Ten?? What Ten done you? Ten just want have some fun!
Jimmy finally got his pistol out of the unfamiliar holster, he pointed it at the gorilla
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RRRRAAAAGAHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!
It charged at Jimmy.
*Phhitww*
The dart hit home. The ape stumbled and fell. Jimmy heard a faint snoring.
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In a bag in Jimmy's apartment at the bottom of his wardrobe, the Disc of Arubanon briefly glowed.
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Jimmy turned on his radio.
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One talking monkey to pick up Sergeant. And could you maybe come get me from under this rubble...
He lay back, and looked at the stars.
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I hope I've made you proud today... You're still my judge of things... Maybe, when I'm worthy... I can't give up on you... You're out there somewhere Robbie, I just know it!
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Comradebot
01-27-2012, 04:06 PM
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MJStark
01-27-2012, 04:12 PM
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Errrrrr... :confused:
Awesome. :D
Nice way to write a completely different comic style without starting fresh. Plus, it was a great way to tie in the end of Cactus Man.
If The Amazing Adventures of Cactus Man needed a big follow up, then The Redemption of Jimmy James might just be it!
LoNdOn
01-27-2012, 04:28 PM
Awesome. :D
Nice way to write a completely different comic style without starting fresh. Plus, it was a great way to tie in the end of Cactus Man.
If The Amazing Adventures of Cactus Man needed a big follow up, then The Redemption of Jimmy James might just be it!
Agreed. Very well written and presented. :)
I miss Cactus Man's quips though :(
CJAlex
01-28-2012, 03:52 AM
Awesome cakes;):D:D:D:D:cool::eek:
Later
CJAlex
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MJStark
01-28-2012, 05:44 AM
Thanks for the support guys :D
The next issue from Stark Publishing will be out early next week ;)
BHK1978
01-28-2012, 01:18 PM
Great well written story thus far.
As always the graphics are awesome but I think that goes without saying.
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Jimmy James was the character that Stephen Root played on Newsradio (A pre-UFC Joe Rogan was on the show as well.). It was a great character but Stephen's best role had to be that of Milton Waddams from Office Space.
MJStark
01-31-2012, 01:46 PM
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**LIMITED EDITION INFINITYPLUSVERSE**
**JIMMY JAMES SERIES**
**TRADING CARD**
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**FREE WITH ISSUE#1**
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MJStark
02-01-2012, 06:11 AM
ISSUE#2
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Centenary City, the place of Jimmy's birth. He'd decided to cram a trip to see his 'Uncle' Karl in to his two days off.
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He sat in The Chief's office, waiting. After about twenty minutes the Chief finally walked into his office
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JIMMY MY BOY!!!!! So good to see you, how long has it been?
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Since Christmas Uncle Karl
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Ahhh, that's right! You brought your young friend to dinner, how is the lovely Ms Hitchins?
Jimmy's eyes welled up, and he told Karl everything.
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...so I had to come see you Uncle Karl, you're the only one left I can talk to. I don't know what to do, I've lost Robbie, Tegan and Cactus Man. I can only get one of those back but...
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Son, son, son. It's awfull about your friends, but you've got to do what The Detective said, look to the future. He's right you know, you've always followed ya pop's example and fought for what's right.
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But without the powers of Cactus Man...
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Sounds to me like you did a pretty good job with that talking ape the other week!
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But...
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But nothing lad! You've got the heart of a hero, an impressive skill with firearms and as a police officer, a right to stick your nose in! Do it lad, make those villains realise that us police aint just there to get shot at and mop up their messes, that they hear a siren, they should run!
Jimmy just sat there. He'd not seen the Chief so worked up for a long time.
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Gee Uncle Karl, if you really think...
Karl smiled at him
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Son, I did some research of my own. This Detective friend of yours, I ran his picture through the databases. He pops up all over history, every time the world is in crisis he's there in the background, guiding things, helping heroes find their path. I reckon, The Detective says you need to do something, you do it lad.
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OK Uncle Karl. For you, and the memory of my folks, and for Robbie and Tegan.
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Good lad!
*RING* *RING*
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Hold on one minute
(he picked up the phone)
Hello?
Yeah.
WHAT?
Right.
I'll see what I can do Solar Girl, I promise.
OK, bye.
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Red and Benny got in touch then?
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Yes, Solar Girl and Benson Burner came to see me at the start of the year, they said you'd sent them. They've been pretty useful to me, filling the gap that you left... Jimmy, do you have that rifle with you?
Jimmy looked at the case by his feet.
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Yeah, I thought your guys might want to take a look at Jay's mods...
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No time for that now. Suit up son, time for you to do an old man a favour...
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It felt strange to Jimmy as he climbed the building. Over the road was the first place he and Robbie had ever worked together. He remembered it like it was yesterday, the way her rhyming grated on his every nerve as Cactus Man. Jimmy had always loved it, but Cactus Man had had to learn to deal with it. The one thing Jimmy didn't miss about the Disc, the compete personallity change. He was sure that if he'd been able to work with her as himself, then maybe she would have told him how she felt that much sooner. He reached the top of the fire escape and set himself up on the rooftop. He scanned the windows of the building opposite.
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Bee Master. One of the lamest gimmicks this side of Chess Master, and about as clever. But at least Chess Master had friends, some minions. All Bee Master's got is a bee hive in a shack!
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They never learn do they, always back to the same places.
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Jimmy looked back at the building. Benson Burner was handcuffed to a steel chair.
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Well I s'pose at least he's figured out ropes and wooden chairs burn, I'll give him that. Ah well, time to do some pest extermination...
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*Phhitww*
The Tranq Sniper Dart flew true, shattered the window pane and hit Bee Master in the neck. He dropped to the ground. Jimmy stopped chambering the next round he had expected to need.
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Oh...
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Jimmy kicked in the door. Benson Burner jumped.
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Hey Benny, need a hand?
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Jimmy??? What are you doing here???
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I popped back to see the Chief
(Jimmy unlocked Benson Burner's handcuffs)
There you go, all free...
*SMACK*
Benson Burner punched Jimmy in the face.
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THEY'RE DEAD BECAUSE OF YOU!!!! THEY'D HAVE NEVER GONE IF IT WASN'T FOR YOU!!! You brought this curse on them! That's what Cactus Man is, a curse! Robbie loved you, and paid the price! And Tegan? She died just for being with you!
Benson Burner walked to the door, then turned.
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You better get out of here Jimmy James. I see you again...
(his fist erupted in a ball of flame)
well, I best not see you again...
He walked out of the building.
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Jimmy was wrapped up warm, despite the sun being out, it sure was colder in Cent City than in San Habbershon! He walked two blocks past the High School and stopped at a house
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Jimmy knew that Robbie's parents had been told that Roberta and Tegan had gone missing on a weekend away in Ravenholme, but he wasn't sure if anyone had told them more. Jimmy felt that they deserved to know at least some of the truth.
*KNOCK* *KNOCK* *KNOCK*
The door opened
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Jimmy! Oh, its lovely to see you!
(Robbie's mom gave him a big hug)
Come inside! Harry, we've got company!
Jimmy stepped inside.
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It's nice to see a friendly face. I ran into Benny last night
Robbie's mom looked concerned
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How did that go?
Jimmy turned his head so that she could see the bruising on his cheek.
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Ah, aww hun
She hugged him again. Robbie's dad walked out from the living room
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Well well, Jimmy James. Good to see you son.
(He shook Jimmy's hand)
Jeanie, make some coffee, warm this boy up. Come, sit.
They sat. Robbie's mom appeared with coffees.
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So, what brings you back here Jimmy?
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Well.... Look, there's something I have to tell you, and it's going to be hard for you to take... Robbie & Tegan... they wern't just ordinary young women... They were heroes, true heroes. They helped keep me... keep Cactus Man together, without them.... It's my fault.... I loved her so much... I don't know what to do...
Jimmy began to cry. Jeanie put her arm around him. Robbie's parents looked at each other
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Son, we know all about it. About you, about them, all of it. A nice young British man in a green suit came the day after we found out about Robbie and gave us this.
Harry produced an envelope.
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He said he was from some organisation or other. He said that we must read the letter, but never tell of its contents and that Tegan's parents had recieved one too. He also gave us this...
(He took out a second envelope)
He said that if you came to see us and told us that you loved Robbie we should give this to you.
Jimmy wiped his eyes and opened the envelope. The parchment scroll inside seemed very brittle, but unrolled with ease.
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The man said it was enchanted paper.
Jimmy nodded as though he had heard of that before and read the scroll
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He looked up. There were no words he could say.
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She alive where she is hun, that's what matters. And she's still doing good deeds, just like her!
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I went to the local library and checked this old book out.
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Turn to page twelve
Jimmy flipped through the pages. He looked at the picture at the bottom.
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A smile cracked across Jimmy's face.
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Now read the dedication
He flipped back to the front of the book.
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He smiled and wiped a tear from his eye as Robbie's mom gave him a hug.
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MJStark
02-07-2012, 04:16 AM
ISSUE#3
ONE WEEK LATER
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*BUZZT* BUZZT* *BUZZT*
Jimmy woke up at the sound of the alarm and turned it off. He got up and walked out of the bedroom.
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It was strange staying in Robbie & Tegan's place. After Jimmy left Robbie's parents he visited Tegan's. They had also welcomed him in with open arms. Tegan's father had told him that it was Tegan's wish that Jimmy live in their apartment rent free and, dispite Jimmy's objections, had all Jimmy's possesions moved to the apartment, forced the keys in his hand and wished him well.
It had been a week but it was still weird. He still expected Robbie and Tegan to walk through the door. He'd found a copy of 'The Legends of Robyn Hood' on Congo.com, but he was trying to pace himself. He knew the overall story, he knew the outcome, but to learn more about the life she lead was something to be savoured. Jimmy had always figured that it was all a load of folklore, but the picture was just too acurate. And the book was endorsed by The Order of Loxley, official historians of Middle Ages Briton, so it was probably the closest Jimmy was ever going to come to knowing the truth...
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Jimmy was walking along the corridor of the block. There was a desk set up beside a door with a police officer sat behind it
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Ahh, if it isn't 'Two-Names' James.
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Sergeant O'Leary??! Wha? Why???
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HAHAHA!! No one told ya then lad? I've moved to San Habbershon. The wife figured the warm weather'd do my back the world o good, so I put in for a transfer. Round here seems they don't like putting old men like me out on the streets, so they gave me a desk job. Then I heard about a young Detective looking for volunteers to join up to the P/HL Unit
(he winked at Jimmy)
I jumped at the chance. O'course, Sergeant Hyatt found it quite amusing, some o tha stories I told her about you when you started out....
Jimmy went bright red
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I'm kidding son, I'm kidding!.... Anyway, I assume you're here to 'interogate the prisoner' sir?
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Yeah, if you wouldn't mind... haha. How is our guest today Sarge?
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Seems pretty quiet today, reckon you've picked a good time to have a chat.
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It hadn't been easy getting funding but he'd got it cleared and the enhancement work was finally finished.
When Ape-X was captured no one would take him, not even his 'cousins', the Ape'd Crusaders, so Jimmy had popped down to the zoo and arranged something himself. Jimmy knew that inside Ape-X there was something good. After all, he saved Rook and who knew how many other crimes he'd foiled that Jimmy had just assumed were the other ape warriors?
Jimmy tapped on the glass. Ape-X looked up from his book, sneered at Jimmy, and continued to read. He tapped again.
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Go way! Good part!
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Ten, I want to talk to you.
Ape-X sighed, carefully folded the corner of the page, dropped the book and walked slowly to the glass.
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What you want? Who you....? TEN KNOW YOU!!!!! RRRRRAAAAGGGGHHHHHHHHH!!!!
Ape-X punched the glass, it didn't break. Ape-X clutched his hand!
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Ten, listen to me. I arranged this cushy pad you've got here. Three meals a day, plenty of toys...
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You think Ten like this crap?
(Ape-X motioned to the enclosure, the monkey bars, the tyre swing)
This baby place! Ten want Plasma TV, Ten want penthouse apartment, Ten want American Dream! What Ten get? Ten get eight by ten cell! Ten see humans with big shiny car an big house with girl with big chests, what they do get that? Ten tell you little man, they destroy! Destroy people, destroy animals, destroy world, destroy, destroy, DESTROY! But they allowed cos they human, Ten do same thing, Ten get treated like animal, get called 'Damn Dirty Ape' an 'Stupid Monkey' an then get shot... by you.
Jimmy was lost for words.... His pager went off
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OK, look, Ten, I'll do you a deal. I sort you out a TV, DVD player and some other stuff an next time, we talk man to man, no glass . How's that sound?
Ape-X stared at him, smiled, and nodded.
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Jimmy rushed into the Police/Heroes Liason Unit office.
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So whats the big news Sergeant?
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Well boss, the studio that runs the Try-Out's show has asked for police back-up for their 'heroes'.
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What?
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Yeah! They heard we'd got some awesome sniper that took down a hairy monster last month and were wondering if he'd like to help out. The Try-Outs aint doing so good. You put them up against someone like Vampire Skull, no problem. But they went up against Golden Sun and Starlet last week, the bad guys got away with the jewels and Rook! The Union went in to save him, but I think the studio are getting embarrassed. So, they'd like some low-key back-up, a way of 'The Try-out's' actually taking down some enemies before the viewers give up completely...
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I get it, I get it *SIGH* So, when?
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That's why the hurry boss, Stupor Man and RPM have already left for the Hyrdo Plant. We had a message phoned in, $10,000,000 or they blow the dam.
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Who?
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No idea, but if you go now the Try-Outs might not have botched it before you get there!
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Jimmy pulled up on the hill overlooking the dam. He'd already liased with the camera crew, who'd patched his radio into the mic frequency. He turned it on and zoomed in on the scene
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...ve it up, vile harlots! We shall defeat you!
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Yeahwhathesaid!
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HAHAHAHAHAHAHAAA!!! You guys really tink ya gonna stop us? Wid tha Masters gone an Cactus Man outta tha way this is our town now!
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My rage filled cohort is correct... but I truely would like to see you try HAHAHAHAA!
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Jimmy had noted the positions of the cameras. Deep Red smashed Stupor Man with a Big Punch, knocking him flying. RPM ran at her and flailed with a Sprinting Punch, somehow missing Deep Red
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Jimmy fired a Bean-Bag Round that smacked Deep Red in the side of the face. To the cameras it would have looked like RPM had just knocked the crap out of Deep Red! Jimmy smiled.
Deep Red looked up from the floor at RPM, shock on her face
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RRRRRAAAAAAGHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!
She Charged at RPM before he had a chance to move and hit him like a Steamroller
...MEANWHILE
Stupor Man finally managed to pull himself back up over the edge of the dam. He staggered to the lake side and dropped to his knees, panting.
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HAHAHAHAHA!!! Nearly finished so soon?
Stupor Man looked up, Wavebreaker was standing on a column of water on the lake. He stared at her.
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*YAWN* ...Urghhh, I hate the way you make me feel, time to wash away... *YAWN* ...the stain that is you
She launched a Water Jet at Stupor Man that knocked him down and washed him back towards the edge of the dam. He banged up against a retaining wall. Wavebreaker stepped onto the dam. Stupor Man got up, ran at her and swung a Punch at her head. He slipped on some water and missed, Jimmy took his chance.
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The Bean-Bag Round hit Wavebreaker square in the forehead, making it look like Stupor Man had connected with his Punch.
...
RPM Sprinted about in a blur, swinging Punches & Kicks at Deep Red, but she managed to avoid or block them all. She judged it just right and delivered a Big Punch to where RPM was about to be, the young hero ran straight in to her fist.
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Leave my friend alone!
Stupor Man Punched her in the back. She turned to look at him.
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Ya gonna pay fo that! Wavebreaker, do tha honours.
A ball of water enveloped Stupor man and surged towards the edge of the dam, Stupor Man flailed inside, unable to do anything to stop his fate.
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OK, time to mop this one up...
Jimmy took aim
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The Tranq Round hit home. Wavebreaker staggered and the ball of water stopped moving.
**DETECTIVE, STUPOR MAN CAN'T BREATHE UNDER WATER YA KNOW!!!**
Jimmy turned down his radio. The Production Chief was obviously getting a little antsy. Jimmy chambered another Tranq Round
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Wavebreaker dropped to the floor and began to snore
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The ball of water collapsed.
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*COUGH* *SPLUTTER* *COUGH* My powers of *COUGH* sleep win the day!
Stupor Man looked over at RPM. He was lying on the ground with Deep Red stood over him.
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Time to stop you, permanantly!
She raised her boot to stamp on the frail looking body of RPM. Stupor Man hit her with an Uppercut that made her stumble backwards
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I said leave my friend alone!
Stupor Man was in Jimmy's line of sight
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Damn it kid move....
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HAHAHAHAHAHA!!! That all you... *YAWN* ...got?
Deep Red hit Stupor Man with a Big Punch that sent him sliding along the floor to RPM. Jimmy took his shot
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The Tranq Round hit home, Deep Red stumbled. Both Stupor Man and RPM put their finger's to their ears
**NOW, WHILE SHE'S STILL REELING FROM THE TRANQ DART, TAKE HER DOWN BOYS!**
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HAHA!! Succumbing to my charms I see...
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NO! Not... you... someone... el...
RPM hit her with a Sprinting Shove which sent her flying towards Stupor Man
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Night night, sleepy time!
Stupor Man delivered his patented Criss-Cross Combo and Deep Red was out for the count
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*CUT*
Assistants ran out from behind the cameras and toweled Stupor Man and RPM dry.
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So where is he?
The assistant pointed towards Jimmy. Stupor Man and RPM waved, Jimmy waved back.
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So he can hear me? Cool! Hey, you up there, good work but next time how about not letting me nearly drown yeah?!
Stupor Man shuddered and walked of towards a limo. RPM shrugged, waved again, and disappeared in a blur towards the limo. By the time Stupor Man had reached it RPM was standing up through the sun-roof, helmet off, waving a bottle of vodka in the air. Stupor Man reached the car, took the bottle off RPM and slugged half of it down before smashing the bottle on the floor and getting in the limo.
*SORRY ABOUT THAT DETECTIVE, WYLLOW SCARLET'S DEATH HAS HIT HIM PRETTY HARD, APPARENTLY THEY HAD JUST BEGUN A RELATIONSHIP BEFORE SHE DISAPPEARED. ANYWAY, YOU CERTAINLY GAVE US THE SHOTS WE NEED, GOOD WORKING WITH YOU DETECTIVE, WE'LL BE IN TOUCH*
With that the crew vehicles drove away.
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Jimmy walked into the office and flopped onto the couch
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How'd it go?
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Yeah, good. Took down the bad-guys, made Stupor Man and RPM look good... :rolleyes: ...not as easy as the TV makes out, haha.
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HA! Yeah, I'll bet!
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That Stupor Man, he's in a pretty bad place right now. Next time you talk to the Production Chief try and get him to make Stupor Man cut down on the booze, it can't be helping things.
He got up and sat at his desk.
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*SIGH* Now, I'd best sort out a TV for that monkey...
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MJStark
02-10-2012, 10:45 AM
ISSUE#4
ONE MONTH LATER
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Jimmy was once again off to try and finally have a chat with Ape-X. He'd tried a couple of days previously but Ape-X was watching his favorite show on his new TV, The Union. He found it so amusing when National Goliath accidentally stepped on Smouldering Fire he'd laughed for a full hour and Jimmy had just given up! Hopefully today would be better.
Jimmy walked to the enclosure door and knocked. That was the other thing Jimmy wasn't so keen on, but had to allow if Ape-X was going to behave... now the locks were on the inside.
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Ten? Open up, its Jimmy
He heard a thump as somethng heavy hit the ground inside the room, then the door opened.
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Ten tell Jimmy, knock an come in, Ten busy!
Ape-X jumped away, landed in his seat and grabbed the PlayBox controller. He was playing Modern Battle Online again. Jimmy sighed, he should have said no to the broadband connection.
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Ten, look, I really wanna talk to you... don't make me pull out the cable
Ape-X looked a Jimmy, huffed, and turned the console off.
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What you want? Why you want talk to Ten? Ten mean, it ok, Jimmy do good things for Ten, but why? Ten knows nothing, can tell Jimmy nothing. Ten watch cop shows, Ten know police always after in-fo-ma-tion. Ten got none.
(Ape-X looked away)
Ten not want to tell Jimmy, Ten know Ten tell Jimmy, no more home for Ten. No more TV, no more games, Ten back to living in alleyway, eatting raw cats, Ten like AwesomeBurgers...
Jimmy hesitently put his hand on Ape-X's hairy shoulder, it was shrugged off.
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Ten not 'Damn Dirty Ape', but maybe Ten is 'Stupid Monkey'. Ten know his cousins got brains, Ten not know why Ten so stupid! Ten want to be normal, Ten want good life... but Ten need to eat, Ten need money for good life, Ten see humans take what humans want from world, so Ten take what Ten want from humans. Maybe Ten just stay locked up, Ten safe, them safe...
Once again Ape-X had Jimmy at a loss for words. He'd not really thought about thing that way before. As an outsider even to his own kind it was no surprise that Ape-X had been forced to do what he needed to do to survive, even if sometimes that was blow off steam.
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Ten, I only really have one question... I know you saved Rook, I'm guessing you've helped out before without ever taking credit. I just want to know why?
Ape-X stared at Jimmy
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Jimmy want know why? Ten tell Jimmy why. Ten see sparkley man get grabbed by two bad men, two bad men beat up little sparkley man, he got no chance. Ten not think that fair, them just pick on sparkley man, so Ten make it fair. Ten not pick on little man, Ten take from humans that has money, Ten even give some to bum who shares alleyway! Ten fight people who deserve it, Ten not bully, Ten not like bullies...
Jimmy thought of the book he had at home, and smiled. His pager went off
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Speaking of bullies, looks like I'm gonna have to run Ten. I really appeciate your answer though. We'll talk more soon, and don't worry, you aint going anywhere
Jimmy winked, and left
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Jimmy walked into the office.
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So, what's going down Sergeant?
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Well...
(she took a deep breath)
...National Goliath & Smouldering Fire were out investigating some robberies when Smouldering Fire was grabbed by what he described as a 'violet blur', so no prizes for guessing who that was! He tracked her to an industrial estate just outside of town but Violet Blur has Highway Mistress and a villainess he's never seen before with her, so he called for back-up. The Try-Outs have gone out, but you said to let you know if they were out there, so...
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...So it's like a Try-Out's reunion show? Well, four of them, they should be alright!
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Since I paged you the production chief called. He'd really like your assistance.
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*SIGH* Such great 'heroes'....
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Jimmy climbed the fire escape and got into position. He could see the heroes and villains in the yard below, squaring up to fight. He turned his radio on
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...urn Smouldering Fire and give your selves up or face the might of National Goliath and the Try-Outs
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You were a Try-Out a couple o monthsh ago mate...
He sounded drunk
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I've got a better idea, how about you walk away and we wont kick your asses?
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Yeah...
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What she said...
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Is it cold in here or is it me? Oh, it is me, Cali Brrrr! HAHAHAAA!!
She launched a Polar Ray at Stupor Man that litrally froze his feet to the floor
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You can't stop the National Goliath!
He swung a Gigantic Punch at Highway Mistress, knocking her to the ground. She drew her pistol and fired, the shot caught National Goliath in the arm, but at his current giganic size it barely registered. He looked around for Violet Blur
...
Violet Blur lauched herself at the stuck and, quite frankly confused looking Stupor Man, hitting him with a Dashing Punch that knocked him onto his back. Cali Brrrr prepared herself to freeze Stupor Man in place permanently.
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He may be a drunken idiot but...
Jimmy lined up his shot
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*Phhitww*
The Tranq Round hit home. She staggered and dropped to one knee.
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HAHA!! *hic* My powersh of sleep tiummph onsh again...
Cali Brrrr shook away the cobwebs and stood up. Her and Highway Mistress advanced on the still prone Stupor Man
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Prepare to be put on ice!
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I don't think so!
Time slowed. The pair turned and Rook launched an Energy Bolt from each hand, knocking them both down in slow motion, time returning to normal just before they hit the floor. Rook turned to Stupor Man and used an Energy Bolt to melt the ice from Stupor Man's feet
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Come on man, get your head in the game!
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ROOOKGETDOWN!!!!!!
RPM dashed towards them and threw himself at Rook, Highway Mistress' Pistol Shot narrowly missed Stupor Man's shoulder. RPM jumped up and hit a Sprinting Shove on Highway Mistress, knocking her down again. Rook tried to get up, but slipped on the icy ground. Luckily for him it meant that Cali Brrrr's Icicle Spray passed over his head. Stupor Man was not so lucky and took the full force in the chest. Once again he was on his back, not knowing what had happened.
*DETECTIVE, YOU HAVE TO PROTECT STUPOR MAN!!!!*
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Jeez, OK OK!
Jimmy lined up another shot
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*Phhitww*
Another Tranq Round hit home, Cali Brrrr staggered
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Who...keeps...doing...that...?
Stupor Man got up and drunkenly charged at Cali Brrrr. Seeing her cohort was about to get leveled Highway Mistress ran towards Stupor Man. He threw a Punch at her but missed wildly, she delivered a High Kick to Stupor Man and he went down
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...
National Goliath had been swatting at Violet Blur in vain, the speedster was just to fast for him.
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RPM! Get Violet!
RPM nodded and began to chase the speedy villain. As National Goliath turned he saw Stupor Man go down.
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NOOOO!!
He charged at Highway Mistress, hitting her with a Gigantic Punch. As she lay on the ground stunned National Goliath delivered a Gigantic Stomp.
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...
Rook and Cali Brrrr were essentially at a stand off, the stream of Energy from Rook's hands colliding with the Polar Ray of Cali Brrrr. Steam poured out from the collision point. But Cali Brrrr was winning, the collision point getting ever closer to Rook.
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Time to thaw this ice queen...
Jimmy took aim
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*Pumnkkkk*
The Bean Bag Round hit Cali Brrrr in the chest. She lost her focus and Rook's Energy Bolt hit home, knocking Cali Brrrr into a wall and unconsciousness
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Looks like she finally 'Chilled Out'! HAHAHAAA!!!
Violet Blur flew past and hit Rook with a Dashing Punch to the gut that ended his laughter pretty quickly. Jimmy chambered a Capacitor Round
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Maybe this will slow her down...
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*Ffffffffwwwwwzzzzzzzzz*
Violet Blur had moved, the round discharged harmlessly into a wall. She hit National Goliath with a Dashing Punch, he swung at her, but his Gigantic Punch missed. A red blur appeared beside the violet one and from what Jimmy could make out RPM and Violet Blur traded blows before Blur tripped RPM and he skidded on his face into a wall. Rook launched an Energy Bolt at her, but she changed direction, heading straight for National Goliath. National Goliath brought his foot down hard, but Violet Blur stopped just short of his Gigantic Stomp. But now she wasn't moving!
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*Pumnkkkk*
The Bean Bag Round hit her in the leg, she clutched her knee in pain. National Goliath brought his Gigantic fist down hard on Violet Blur, the Punch knocking her out
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By the time Jimmy had got down off the building the paramedics were wheeling Stupor Man into the back of an ambulance. National Goliath beckoned him over.
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Good work there Detective, if you hadn't taken her knee out I don't know how we'd have slowed her down.
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Yeah, thanks for distracting that Cali Brrrr for me too man!
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Just doing my job guys.
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SorryaboutStuporManhe'snotcopingwellatall. You'dthinkhimandWyllowScarlethadbeentogetherforyea rsthewayhe'scarryingon!
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Hey kid, word of advice. You don't talk ill of Wyllow Scarlet...
(Jimmy chambered a round)
...got it?
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Ijustmeantthat...
He saw the look in Jimmy's eyes and stopped talking
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Look, you guys are meant to be heroes! Cactus Man, Robyn & Wyllow never needed Police back-up. You need to get your sh*t together guys, I don't get paid extra for saving your asses!
Jimmy walked away. National Goliath turned to the director.
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Marti, you did shout cut, right?
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MJStark
02-19-2012, 03:57 PM
ISSUE#5
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National Goliath turned
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Marti, was that a cut?
A voice boomed around the yard
I believe not...
Two figured stepped from the shadows
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Jimmy ran. Hysteria went to follow but Aaron Ablaze stopped her
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Ah, the meddling detective can wait, first its time to finish off these fools!
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Ablaze and Hysteria both threw Punches, Ablaze's knocked RPM to the ground, National Goliath simply looked at Hysteria, grew to a massive size, grabbed her in One Hand and Tossed her away. Rook aimed his hand at Aaron Ablaze but he was swaying, obviously dizzy. His Energy Bolt missed Ablaze by a wide margin. RPM, now up again, Sprinted at Ablaze, but staggered at the last moment and his Punch also missed Ablaze
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Heroes... how tiresome...
National Goliath charged at Ablaze, Ablaze hit him with an Energy Blast but Goliath kept going, Ablaze only just diving out of the way of National Goliath's Gigantic Punch.
...
Rook decided to change tactic's, slowed time around Hysteria and fired an Exploding Energy Ball at her, the blast throwing her against a wall
...
Jimmy had finally managed to get into a position of cover from which he could shoot. He chambered a Capacitor Round and took aim
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*Ffffffffwwwwwzzzzzzzzz*
Just as he pulled the trigger Rook's Exploding Energy Ball knocked Hysteria out of Jimmy's scope-sight. The flash left his eye momentarily blind
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ARRRRRRGGGGHHH!!
Jimmy's Capacitor Round ricocheted of a steel drum and hit the massive bulk of National Goliath
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z*z*z*z*AAAAzzzzzAzAzAAzA*z*z*z*z
National Goliath lost control and shank back to his normal size. Hysteria pulled herself up and smiled. As Goliath tried to get up Hysteria Punched him back down to the ground
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Time to cut you down to size!
She Kicked him in the head.
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...
As Jimmy's vison cleared he surveyed the yard. RPM was on his hands and knees, his visor open, throwing up. Aaron Ablaze looked at RPM and laughed
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HAHAHAHAHAHAA! Looks like you can't handle the way I make you feel! Time to stop running!
Aaron Ablaze launched an Energy Blast from each hand, both smashed into RPM, he tumbled away, then lay motionless
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...
Rook aimed his arm at Hysteria again and hit her with an Energy Bolt. She staggered, then turned to him and laughed
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HAHAHAHAHAHA! You'll have to do better than that!
Jimmy chambered a Tranq Round
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Well lets see how you like this...
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*Phhitww*
The Tranq Round hit home, Hysteria dropped to one knee.
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SHOW... YOURSELF... COWARD!!!
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I don't think so...
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*Pumnkkkk*
The Bean Bag Round flew true, Hysteria dropped to the ground unconscious
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Jimmy scanned the yard for Ablaze. When he finally found him Ablaze was staring right at him with his arm extended
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WHY NOT JOIN THE FUN DETECTIVE??
Ablaze's Energy Blast knocked Jimmy from his cover and into the open. Ablaze turned to Rook and hit him with an Energy Blast. Rook returned fire with an Energy Bolt but was so dizzy he missed by miles. Jimmy got up, he was so dizzy himself he was pretty sure he was going to lose his lunch. Not able to bear the thought of closing one eye he shot from the hip
*Pumnkkkk*
He missed...
*Pumnkkkk*
...and missed again, but he had Aaron Ablaze's full attention. Rook steadied himself and threw an Exploding Energy Ball at Ablaze, but only succeeded in blowing up the barrels next to him. Ablaze shielded his face from the shrapnel
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AHHAAAA!!! I think your time has run out!
Ablaze ran at Rook and hit him with an Energy Infused Punch that knocked Rook out cold
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Ablaze turned and walked towards Jimmy. He held out his hand towards Jimmy. Jimmy looked away, sure he was about to be blasted to pieces
**FFFFfffftt**
Jimmy looked back, Ablaze was staring at his hand
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Guess I'll just have to do this the old fashioned way!
Jimmy fired...
*Pumnkkkk*
...and missed again. Ablaze picked him up, then Punched him back down
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You shouldn't have interfered Detective!
He Kicked Jimmy in the ribs as he tried to get up. Jimmy rolled onto his back, pulled out his Tranq Pistol and fired
*Phhitww*
Even at point blank range Jimmy just couldn't keep his hand steady enough to hit Ablaze!
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Give up Detective, someone might get hurt...
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NEVER!!!
*Phhitww* *Phhitww*
Both shots missed. Ablaze Kicked him again. And then again. Jimmy, face bloody, was dragged to his feet.
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Yes... I think I'm just about recharged...
He hit Jimmy with an Energy Infused Punch that spun Jimmy round. He dropped to the floor.
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*CUT* *CUT* *CUT*
Marti the director stepped out of the shadows
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What are you playing at Ablaze? We pay you to lose, not beat up our stars! We can't show our guys losing! Who do you think you ar..kkkkk..
Aaron Ablaze had grabbed Marti's throat
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My dear Martin, for too long have we taken your money, let ourselves become seen as little more than a joke for your benefit. And now you're trying to keep us in line by using the detective there as your enforcer? Well, that time has now passed...
Ablaze threw Marti into a wall, he lay there, his head at an odd angle
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Now... YOU WILL ALL CONTINUE TO FILM OR SUFFER THE SAME FATE AS OUR DEAR MARTIN! You boy, come forward.
The terrified cameraman stepped forward. Ablaze talked straight into the camera
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Humans of the world, I am Aaron Ablaze, hear my voice and tremble! For too long have we villains acted as the pawns of the makers of The Union, allowing ourselves to be defeated to give you all hope. BUT NO MORE! You should know, there is no hope for you mere humans. The time of the meta-human is upon you! We are the powerfull, we are the future, and you, you are obsolete. Meta-Human's of the world, join me. We must rise up, defy persecution and take our birthright, this planet, for our own.
Ablaze motioned to Smouldering Fire, who Hysteria had dragged out of the building, bound and gagged
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This foolish hero, he represents what is wrong with our culture. He protects humans against those of power, when he should join me in claiming this planet as our own. Thus his fate is sealed, a fate that any who oppose us will share...
He turned to Smouldering Fire and a glowing ball of energy grew between Aaron Ablaze's hands. Smouldering Fire had a look of terror in his eyes.
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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOO....
Time slowed. Rook ran at Hysteria, blasting her with an Energy Bolt, she fell in slow motion. The Massive Energy Blast left Ablaze's hands and, despite the effect of Rook's time slowing powers, streaked towards Smouldering Fire. Rook dived into the way, firing off Energy Bolts at Ablaze. Ablaze went down. The Massive Energy Blast hit Rook
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AAAAAAHHHHHGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHRR RRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR RRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR...
The flesh burnt from his skin, then the muscle beneath burnt away. Rook's body dropped to the ground. Sirens could be heard approaching in the distance. Ablaze pulled himself to his feet, and looked at the retching cameraman.
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Back on me boy. Now, you have seen the results of challenging me. Meta-Human's of the world, join me or face your destruction!
He turned his back on the camera and walked away, Hysteria walking into shot and joining him, they rounded a corner and were gone.
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Jimmy woke up in a hospital bed. He turned his head, Sandy Hyatt was asleep in the chair next to him, he looked out of the window and could see the bright lights of San Habbershon outside his window. He looked back at Sandy, her eyes were open, it looked like she had been crying
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How ya doing there boss?
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You.... tell me...
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Well, 5 broken ribs, a cracked cheekbone, two missing teeth and a lot of bruising, but you'll live
(She smiled weakly at him)
All in all, you got off light...
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What... do you... mean...?
Her smile faded
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RPM's OK, seems like Hysteria shattered National Goliath's jaw and Stupor Man's lost the plot, I heard the doctor say they're gonna recommend enforced rehab to get his head together and off the booze. Rook saved Smouldering Fire's life...
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Rook? He got... knocked out... How.. did he...?
She looked away
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Smouldering Fire told us Rook used his own body to protect him. He gave his life to save him, Rook made the ultimate sacrifice...
(There were tears in her eyes)
We never told anyone, but me an Rook... well, you know as well as I do how it is when you look out for someone and, over time...
She turned back, tears were rolling down her face
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Oh Sandy... come here...
He pulled her towards him and gently hugged her as she sobbed into his shoulder
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Slasherzeta
02-22-2012, 08:14 PM
Loving this. Very good way of continuing the Jimmy James story that I did want to see continued. And now that I've read this, time to go check out the Robyn Hood one...
MJStark
02-29-2012, 03:41 PM
Loving this. Very good way of continuing the Jimmy James story that I did want to see continued. And now that I've read this, time to go check out the Robyn Hood one...
Cheers :D Hope you enjoyed Robyn too ;)
Sorry for the delay in the next installment folks, had a touch of Noro Virus :( Will be up at some point ;)
Criminal Appeal
03-01-2012, 01:25 PM
Glad to hear both will return. I don't think I've commented in any of your threads, but I've read them all, and each has been very entertaining.
MJStark
03-02-2012, 09:56 AM
ISSUE#6
TWO WEEKS LATER
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The memorial service for Rook was packed. Not with well-wishers, but with camera crews. The death of yet another superhero in San Habbershon had attrracted a lot of attention and the studio had lapped it up, selling the rights to anyone who wanted them. They made Jimmy sick!
An orphan, Rook had very little family anyway, but his foster sister Kimko was the only one who had wanted to come. Apparently his foster parents had disowned him when his powers began to manifest themselves but their daughter Kimko never lost touch. She was sat in the front row with The Union, The Try-Outs and Sandy, her and Sandy crying on each other's shoulders. Neither Stupor Man or Smouldering Fire had turned up.
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...in the name of the father, the son, and the holy ghost, AMEN. And now Cosmic Girl would like to say a few words
Cosmic Girl, dressed in her black costume, got up and walked up to the front. She turned to face the congregation and flash-bulbs began to pop. She waited till they stopped to begin
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Although I had known Rook only a short few months we became firm friends. He was a realist, he always knew the quickest way to spur his fellows into action. He was a dreamer, but he always fought to make those dreams a reality. And he was a hero, in his mind, his body and his soul. He was a young man, too young to be taken from this world. So much potential gone, so much life left to live...
In the front row Kimko began to sob harder. Cosmic Girl looked away from the congregation and into the cameras at the back of the room
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Aaron Ablaze went too far. I vow to you, the people of the world, that he will not go unpunished. Aaron Ablaze, I know you are watching this! Your days are numbered, the fun might of The Union will be brought upon you! We, with every meta-human who is willing, will hunt you down, and you will pay!
Kimko wailed and ran from the church, Sandy chased after her. As she ran past Jimmy he could see fury in Sandy's eyes. He got up slowly, his ribs still bound from the beating he received himself at the hands of Aaron Ablaze, and followed them.
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...n't believe she would do that!
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I know, Kimko, I know...
Sandy saw Jimmy and beckoned him over
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Kimko Kobiashi, this is my boss, my friend, Detective James
Kimko wiped her eyes and shook Jimmy's hand
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It's a pleasure to meet you Detective James
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Please, call me Jimmy. I'm so sorry for your loss. I did everything I could...
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I know Detective... Jimmy. I saw the footage, you tried hard, you fought to the last, but you are just a mortal man. She...
(Kimko motioned to the church)
...she could have stopped them, she's meant to be one of the most powerfull heroes in the world! But she just stood aside, and now she uses my brother's eulogy to broadcast a theat??!
The tears began streaming down her face and she hugged Sandy again
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It's just not right, not fair...
Sandy held her close, tears rolling down her own face. Jimmy made a decision.
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THE NEXT DAY
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Jimmy had just finished drafting an email, he invited Sergeant Hyatt over to read it
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Sandy looked at her boss
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Really??
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Yeah, really. I don't feel right doing it anymore. The studio knew Ablaze was there, they know how dangerous his powers can be, and they let us walk right in there! My Uncle Karl said something to me when I went back to Cent City. He told me to go out there and be a hero, prove to the villians of the world that the cops won't back down so easy. How heroic is it to work for a company that is paying villians to cause trouble? So I'm though with them. If a case comes through I think I can handle, then I'll take it myself, screw their ratings!
Jimmy hit send. He looked up at Sandy properly for the first time. Her eyes were bloodshot, she looked exaughsted.
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Hey, how you holding up?
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*SIGH* Kimko stayed at my place last night, nice girl. She was telling me stories about her an Rook growing up, about their parents, well, Rook's foster parents and how they turned on him when his powers began to appear. Then we talked about me and Rook...
She looked out of the window, tears began to form in her eyes. She took a deep breath and quickly wiped them away. She forced a smile
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Its silly, we'd only been together a couple of months, but he felt like the one, you know? Anyway...
(she took another deep breath)
...how about you? How are you doing?
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Me? Oh, I'm OK, ribs are painfull, but at least I got my teeth all fixed now.
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No... I meant... about... you know... Robyn...
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Oh..... Well....
Jimmy panicked. He'd not had it as hard as Sandy, he knew that Robyn had survived and lived on, whereas Rook's definate demise had been broadcast for the world to see. He held on to the fact of her continued life, even now the book was in his desk draw. But he swore he would not tell.
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...eerrrrrrrrrr.....
Screw it, Robbie would understand. He opened the draw, took out the book and handed it to her.
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Page twelve
She turned to the page
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Sandy looked at the page, then at Jimmy.
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So?
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Don't you see the resemblence? Right now she is alive somewhere else in time! She's still there, just seperated from me by time. The way I see it time moves for her, same as us. With this book I can even kind of see what she's doing...
He took the book and flicked through the book, then showed her a page
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See, roughly now she's...
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Jimmy... its legend! So the drawings look a bit like them, so what? You think I don't see Rook every day on the street? Boss, you've got to stop clutching at straws and accept it... we both have...
All of a sudden it dawned on Jimmy how crazy it must have sounded. It had been a mistake to say anything, maybe that was why Robbie had told him not to. He put the book away.
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Maybe you're right Sandy, maybe I just need to let it go. I don't need to read that book to know she's gone from me...
Sandy put her hand on his shoulder
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Look, its Kimko's last night in town tonight, I told her I'd take her out to see the bright lights of San Habbershon, why don't you come too? I've never seen you let your hair down and its about time this office had a night out.
Jimmy smiled
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Yeah.... alright. As long as you're not planning on inviting Sergeant O'Leary along to this 'office party'. Now there is an old man you don't want to drink with!
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An old man you don't want to drink with don't ya mean? Ah, the stories I could tell...
Shocked, Jimmy turned
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*COUGH* Can we help you sergeant?
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It's just I've got a guy from Union Studios on the line, says he needs to speak to someone about some email. Then he used some words that Mrs O'Leary would box my ears for if I used um in front o her about us cops in general, you in particular lad!
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Oh really?!!
Jimmy grabbed the phone on his desk, Sandy stopped him.
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Nah boss, I'll talk to them, explain the situation. Besides, you've got an appointment.
Jimmy looked at his watch and grabbed his coat. He turned to Sandy
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Don't let um off easy!! They give you any trouble, let me know, I'll go down to the studio myself!
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Oh, trust me boss, I wont go easy!
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Jimmy walked into the gun range. The sound was intense, he'd obviously come at the wrong time. He saw Jay and walked over to him
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HEY KID, GOT A MINUTE?
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FOR YOU DETECTIVE, ANY TIME
They walked into Jay's office and shut the door. At least now they wouldn't have to shout.
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So, did you check out that weapon system for me?
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Yeah...
(Jay pulled a box from under the counter)
...It's pretty much a primative version of the set-up you've got on your gun. It's just a HUD mounted on the helmet instead of set in an eye-piece. The gun is your latest army issue heavy cal with an underslung grenade launcher. A nice piece of kit, where'd you get it?
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Ape-X. He said took it off a guard when he escaped the lab he was born in. Did you make those mods I asked for?
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Yeah, piece of cake. It's all army issue fittings in there so no problems, good to go.
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Good. Well Jay, I owe you one. In fact, give Sandy a call upstairs, tell her I said you're coming out with us tonight.
(Jimmy looked around and leant in closer)
You got those painkillers I asked for?
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Oh, yeah...
(he handed Jimmy a sheet of tablets)
Latest stuff. No pain, no side effects.
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Thanks kid.
(Jimmy picked up the box)
I'll see you later
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It had been a few days since Jimmy had visited Ape-X, but he was definately getting better. The zoo staff had told Jimmy that he now often wandered around the zoo at night, and spent hours at the petting zoo feeding the animals. But Jimmy had spoken to him about it, Ape-X felt bad for them. He wanted to free them. Jimmy hoped he could channel that energy somewhere else
Jimmy walked into Ape-X's room. Ape-X was watching a documentary on the Historical Channel
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Hey Ten!
Ape-X looked around, flipped off the TV and jumped down from his 'high rock'.
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Hey Jimmy, Ten happy to see you. Ten been watching Worlds Funniest Videos, that Castro, he a riot!
Jimmy didn't see the point in correcting him, it never made any difference
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Yeah.... Look, Ten, I wanna talk serious for a minute. You like it here right?
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Yeah, Ten like.
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You know all this is being paid for right?
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Yeah, Ten know.
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So, I reckon its about time you earned your keep. How would you like to come out there and fight crime with me?
Ten just stared at him. Jimmy grabbed the box and opened it. He handed Ape-X the gun.
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I've had it modified. Rubber Bullets and Stun Grenades. Non-lethal, we're not out to kill anybody here. And I sorted you out some more fitting body armour.
Ape-X grabbed it and put it on
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How Ten look?
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Like you're part of the SHPD. So, are you in?
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Yeah, Ten in. If Ten good Ten get better home?
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We'll see...
Jimmy's pager went off
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The fax on Ape-X's wall clattered into life
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So Ten, ready to start work?
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Jimmy and Ape-X arrived at 167 Maplewood Drive, a lumber yard.
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OK Ten, we're gonna go slow and by the numbers so you can get used to doing things my way
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OK boss.
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Right, first we need to get over the fence, the gate is padlocked soooo.....
Jimmy looked around for a decent place to go over the fence
**KRR-CHUNK**
Jimmy looked back at Ape-X who had just ripped the padlock off the gate
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What? It open now.
Jimmy rolled his eyes. He pushed the gate open a little and stuck his gun through for a better view through his eye-piece.
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All clear, they must be in that hut.
Jimmy crouched an ran across the yard, Ape-X just strolled after him and crouched next to Jimmy
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You're supposed to do what I do!
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Jimmy never say that.
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OK, from now on...
Jimmy could hear voices inside
They've only got ten minutes left darlin, I reckon we just scrag im and get it over with.
But Ablaze would punish us most serverly if we did not stick to the plan, its only ten minutes...
OK, OK, I'm gonna go get the camera ready.
Jimmy heard footsteps and a door slam.
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I know those voices, Blind Delphi and Miss Arsenic, come on
He motioned to Ape-X to follow, and crept around to the door. They stood either side of it.
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On three... One... Two...
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Ape-X kicked the door through and fired a Stun Grenade into the room.
*PUNNNCCCCCCC........!POKK!*
He charged in and looked around. As the smoke cleared he saw a movement, then dropped to his knees holding his head.
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AAAAAAGGGHHHHHHHHHH!!!!
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HEHEHEHEHEE!! If you've got a brain I can mash it!
Jimmy poked his rifle around the corner
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He fired...
*Phhitww*
The tranquiliser took effect instantly and Blind Delphi went down
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The door burst open and Miss Arsenic Slashed at Ape-X with her Katana, Ape-X backed off holding his arm. Jimmy shot from the hip
*Ffffffffwwwwwzzzzzzzzz*
The Capacitor Round hit Miss Arsenic in the chest in a shower of sparks, the jolt hurling her backwards over a saw-table. Jimmy turned to Ape-X
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Are you OK?!?
Ape-X moved his hand, the wound had already stopped bleeding.
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Yeah, Ten OK now. Sword lady not gonna be though!
He ran through the door, firing off Rubber Bullets on Full Automatic.
*D*D*D*D*D*D*D*D*D*D*D*D*D*D*D*D*D*
Miss Arsenic went to run but got caught in the knee. Jimmy was sure he heard it shatter.
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EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEAAAAGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!
She grabbed her bow and tried to fire a Longbow Arrow at the advancing pair, but missed wildly. Ape-X put the muzzle of his gun to her forehead
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You a lucky lady, friend not here, Ten rip you apart for hurting Ten. Maybe Ten pull trigger...
Miss Arsenic closed her eyes tight
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...but Ten try to be good ape
He turned away from her. She reached for one of her pistols, but she had forgotten about Jimmy. He drew his own pistol and Pistol Whipped her into unconsciousness
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Jimmy found Smouldering Fire in another room, handcuffed to a steel chair bolted to the floor. At least Jimmy had to give them some credit, there was no way Smouldering Fire was going to escape on his own
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Awwwww man, am I happy to see you Detective! Errrr, you got keys for these cuffs?
Ape-X walked into the room. Smouldering Fire looked terrified
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Ten no need key
He snapped the chain on the cuffs
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Don't be scared of Ten afro man, Ten good guy
Ape-X's smile beamed from ear to ear. Sergeant O'Leary walked into the room.
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I hear you could use someone pickin up & takin away?
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Ahh, please Sergeant. Have you met my new partner?
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Ahhh, not formally. Its good to meet you Officer Ten, excuse me if I don't shake cos you look like you could crush an old mans hand.
He winked, patted Ape-X on the shoulder and left to deal with Arsenic & Delphi. Ape-X turned to Jimmy
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Officer Ten? Ten cop now?
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Only if you want to be Ten...
Officer Ten's smile grew.
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Lets get you home, its been a big day... and I've got a big night ahead of me...
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In its forgotten bag in the bottom of a box Jimmy had never got around to unpacking the Disc of Arubanon briefly glowed.
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Jimmy was late. He scanned the room and saw Sandy waving at him from a side booth across the bar. He waved back and made the universal 'Do you want a drink' motion. She got up and met him at the bar
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So, how did it go?
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Yeah, good. I mean, Ten's like a raw recruit, but I think he'll work out fine. How about here?
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Yeah, inviting Jay along was a good call, who'd have thought that cute little Japanese girl was so into her heavy artillary!!
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WHAT?!
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Yeah, they're getting on well. So well I've been talking to random strangers for the last half hour! So you owe me a big drink boss!
She winked at him
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HA!! What you drinking?
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Vodka, rocks
Jimmy ordered a triple and gave it to her
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Why Detective, anyone would think you were trying to get me drunk!! HAHAHAHAHA!!
Jimmy went bright red. She took him by the arm
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Come on, maybe they'll interact if there's two of us...
They walked over to the booth. Jay and Kimko were all over each other
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...or maybe not!! Guys, guys! Get a room!
Jay and Kimko looked at her, then at each other.
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Errrrrr.... I think I might head off to get a coffee...
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Oh, I love coffee, I'll come too...
They quickly got up & grabbed their coats. Jay brought his mouth near Jimmy's ear
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Thanks for inviting me boss, I owe you one.
He took Kimko's arm
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Come, Ms Kobioshi, let us go drink coffee! And if you're good maybe I'll take you to the range and show you my large caliber weapon!
Kimko blushed and giggled. Jay winked at Jimmy and they were gone. Jimmy sat down in the booth, Sandy sat opposite
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Well, who'd have thought...!?!
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You know, knowing Jay he could well mean he's actually going to take her to the range and crack out the .50cal...
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You reckon?
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Well, lets just say I don't want to think about the alternative!
He pulled a disturbed face and shuddered
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HAHAHA!! Yeah... Nice to see that love at first sight exists though...
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Yeah...
They both stared at their drinks, neither sure what to say. Sandy grabbed her triple vodka and downed it
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You won't find help with your problems there you know
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Yeah, but I'm owed a night off them right?
(she smiled)
Come on Mr Serious, lighten up, you're like a coiled spring. Unwind a bit!
Jimmy looked at his glass, he'd ordered the same triple vodka. It was meant to last him the night, Jimmy wasn't a big drinker. He grabbed the glass and downed it.
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That's the spirit! HA! Spirit! Waiter! Bring us tequila!
Jimmy stared at Sandy, she winked at him...
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That was all Jimmy remembered of the night...
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CJAlex
03-03-2012, 11:32 AM
Robyn going be p*ssed when she finds out about Jimmy and Hyatt.;);)
Still great work
Later
CJAlex
:D:cool::D:cool::D:cool::D:cool:
Tweek It
03-08-2012, 05:47 PM
Awesome work on Jimmy's and Robyn's stories.
MJStark
03-16-2012, 01:00 PM
ISSUE#7
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A bright sunny morning in San Habbershon. The light streamed through the open curtains onto the bed. Jimmy opened his eyes. The light blinded him and his head felt like it had exploded. He thrust his head under the covers and tried again. That was a lot more bareable. He looked down, he was just in his underwear. He didn't remember getting undressed... he didn't remember getting home either. He focused for the first time on the cloth in front of his eyes
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Sandy owned a duvet identical to this one... Jimmy started to panic
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Oh no....
Despite his pounding head he squinted his eyes and peaked out of the covers.
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Jimmy jumped out of bed and threw on his clothes. As he rushed towards the door it opened. Sandy walked in dressed in a silky dressing-gown holding a cup of coffee. Jimmy stopped dead in his tracks.
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HA! Never had you pegged for an early morning runner, did Gonzalez tell you about my cooking or something? Hahaha!
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Sandy, look... I.... I was really drunk last night and I don't know what happened but...
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You mean you don't remember??
(she smiled suggestively at him)
Maybe I'll have to remind you...
She walked towards him. Jimmy shut his eyes, he had always found her quite attective in a severe kind of way and her body-hugging silky gown didn't leave a huge amount to the imagination.
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Look, Sandy...
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At 10:36pm you told me you were going to drink me under the table... At 10:49pm you told the waitress, and I quote, 'You shee her there? The one in the middle... She'sh the besht pershon I know... you give her whatever she wantsh... and give me a double of it!!'
Jimmy opened his eyes, she was stood in front of him pretending to read from a police issue notebook and smiling at him
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At 11:24pm I called a taxi as you were temperarily incapable of speech. You didn't want to go home so I brought you back here. At 11:57pm you told me you loved me in a very drunken and over-the-top manner and at 11:58pm you told me that you could never love anyone like you loved Robyn, the same as I could never love anyone the same as Rook...
(her smile faded)
We both had a good cry then I brought you in here to my sisters room and I went to bed.
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So this isn't... I mean... we didn't...
She put on an expression of mock affront
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Oh reaaaally?? Do I seem like the kind of girl who puts out on the first date? HAHAHA!! No boss, we.... just no. But the look on your face was priceless!
(she grinned at him)
So, you want this coffee and some breakfast or you still wanna do a runner?
Jimmy smiled and took the coffee.
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Jimmy and Hyatt had arrived at work seperately to avoid any kind of precinct rumour-mill starting up. On the way in Jimmy bumped into Jay, who was also wearing same the clothes as the night before
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Morning Detective... looks like I wasn't the only one who didn't get home last night!
(Jay winked at him)
Thanks for inviting me along last night, Kimko's amazing! I've never met a girl who was so into her guns before...
(he started to blush)
After we left we went to a motel...
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WHOA WHOA WHOA!! I don't need to hear this Jay!!
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But Detective... Jimmy, I need a favour...
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What have you done kid?
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No, nothing like that... Would you be my best man?
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WHAT!!!!?????!!!!
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Yeah! I proposed this morning, she said yes! I'm meeting her parents tonight and we're getting hitched as soon as possible!
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Seriously? Jay, thats a bit sudden, you sure about this? You only met last night...
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Never more sure of anything in my life, and she feels the same. So, will you?
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If I'm who you want Jay... then I'd be honoured.
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Jimmy walked into the office, Sandy was on the phone. She looked shocked.
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....yeah, OK. If your sure then of course I will...... OK, see you later.
She hung up the phone and looked at Jimmy
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You are never gonna guess what I just heard... that was Kimko on the phone...
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Wait, lets see if I'm psychic... Her and Jay spent the night together and now they're engaged?
(Sandy stared wide-eyed at him)
I just bumped into Jay on the way in. He asked me to be best man.
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Kimko just asked me to be a bridesmaid!
(Sandy grinned)
I've never been a bridesmaid before!
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A first for me too. Well, I just hope it works out for them, Jay's a good kid and Kimko seems like a nice girl...
Sergeant O'Leary knocked on the open door and walked in
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Yes Sergeant?
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Sorry to barge in lad, but we've had a report come in that a woman with claws and a 'cat-man' are smashing up a music store in mid-town. Beat cops are saying its not their jurisdiction...
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OK, thanks Sarge
Jimmy turned to Sandy, she was already on the phone. Jimmy's hangover was still hanging, he felt a little sick, then more sick. He rushed off
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When he got back Sandy was still on the phone.
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...o do you think you are?? You came to us.... No, that's not how it.... Look, if you don't want to lia.... You know what John? F**k you!
She slammed the phone down
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Well, looks like we wont be working with the studio again! 'Petty crime' is apparently below their 'mega-star' heroes! They've got more important things to do like save the world from Aaron Ablaze to worry about a store getting trashed!
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What? Of all the crappy, low-down.... You know what, screw um! I feel like crap but I'll grab my gear. Can you page Ten for me and send O'Leary to go pick him up? Tell him I'll meet him there.
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By the time Jimmy arrived on the scene the street had been shut off by the regular cops. Jimmy snuck around the back of a building opposite, climbed onto it's roof and set himself up. He saw O'Leary arrive with Ten down in the street. The regular cops backed away as Officer Ten got out of the back of the police van. Jimmy keyed his radio
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You reading me Ten?
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*Ten hear you boss. Where you?*
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I'm on the building to your left...
(Ten looked up and waved)
... you ready?
Down in the street Ten nodded
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OK...
Jimmy grabbed a loud-hailer
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YOU IN THE MUSIC STORE, THIS IS THE SAN HABBERSHON POLICE DEPARTMENT. WE KNOW YOU'RE IN THERE, COME OUT WITH YOUR HANDS UP!
There was silence for a few seconds...
***CRASH...tinkletinkletinkle***
The glass door blew outwards, shattered by what looked to Jimmy like a cash register. Officer Ten covered his face from the glass. Two figures stepped through the doorway
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GOD! All I wanted was for them to sell my new solo album for me! If they'd have just done it I wouldn't have had my 'little accident'. But you asked for it coppers, you get the live performance! LET'S ROCK!!!
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Deft Leopard Pounced at Officer Ten, but Ten had already moved and swung a massive Monkey Punch at Honey Badger, knocking her down. As Deft Leopard jumped back up Jimmy took aim
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*Phhitww*
The Tranq Round hit home and Deft Leopard went down
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Honey Badger got back to her feet and wiped blood from her mouth
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You made me bleed my own blood! Prepare to get sliced up by THE HONEY BADGER!!
She flailed at Ten with her claws but he managed to jump back. He unleashed a hail of Rubber Bullets on Full Automatic
*D*D*D*D*D*D*D*D*D*D*D*D*D*D*D*D*D*
One caught her in the shoulder. Even from across the street Jimmy heard bones cracking
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AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAA!!!
She flailed a Kick at Ten and, while it connected, the ape didn't even seem to notice. She backed away holding her shoulder, her left arm limp, as Ten took a step towards her. Jimmy keyed his radio
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Back off Ten, I'll put her out
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*Ffffffffwwwwwzzzzzzzzz*
The Capcitor Round hit home and the shock jolted through Honey Badger. She shook her head and started to get up
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Is...that...all...you...got...coppers?
Ten grabbed Honey Badger, picked her up and brought her face to face with him
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No, shouty big hair lady, Ten still got this!
He pulled back his head and smashed Honey Badger with a Helmeted Head-Butt that knocked her out cold
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By the time Jimmy got down to the street the regular cops had picked up Honey Badger & Deft Leopard, cuffed them and taken them away. Ten was surrounded by officers congratulating him, welcoming him to the force, patting him on the back or shaking his hand. Ten was grinning from ear to ear. As he approached they turned and saluted him.
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At ease. It's great that you want to welcome Officer Ten to the force, I appreciate it. But there is statements to get, a mess to clean up and a road to open... Come on, hop to it!
YES SIR!
They rushed off and got on with their jobs. Jimmy turned to Ten
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You did well my friend. And the other officers seem to like you... We'll have to see about getting you closer to the station, can't have O'Leary running to fetch you all the time...
Ten's grin got bigger.
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In its forgotten bag in the bottom of a box Jimmy had never got around to unpacking the Disc of Arubanon briefly glowed.
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After an exciting morning came the mountain of paperwork that goes along with any police department. With most crimes happening at night it felt to both Jimmy and Sandy that the day was all backwards. At around 7pm Jimmy threw his pen down.
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Right, thats it! The sun is going down, my head is still killing me from last night. I... am... done!
He looked over at Sandy. She was holding a picture in her hand, tears rolling down her face. She realised he was looking, wiped her eyes, got up and stood by the window.
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I'm sorry... I just found it in my bag and...
She looked out of the window. Jimmy picked up the picture, it was of Sandy and Rook in a bar, all smiles. He put it back down and walked over to her. He pulled her towards him and gave her a hug, she squeezed him tight
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It'll be OK Sandy, I promise, it just takes time... are you sure you don't want some time off? You could do with a break...
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No, I need to keep busy...
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OK, OK. Well, if you need anything... you know, someone to talk to or to do something... anything at all, you let me know. I'm here for you Sandy.
She pulled away from him slightly & looked him in the eye
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Thanks Jimmy, I appreciate it, you're a good friend
She kissed him on the cheek and hugged him again. Jimmy looked out across the street at the building opposite.
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WHAT THE HELL???!
Sandy, shocked, pulled away
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What's wrong!!?
He looked at Sandy
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Look over there, on top of the roof!
They both looked
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What?
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But I saw... it was... Sandy, I saw Robyn, I know I did! And she saw you kiss me! She's probably freaking out right now, I've got to go find her!
He went to rush out of the office. Sandy grabbed his arm to stop him. She looked concerned but smiled weakly at him
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I'm sure you think you did see her Jimmy. But you know as well as I do that...
(her eyes started to water, she took a deep breath)
... that they're gone Jimmy. Rook and Robyn. Both gone. Your eyes were playing tricks, just like mine do every day. Look, you're here for me, but I'm here for you too. If we lean on each other we can make it through this, right?
Jimmy looked at her and nodded
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Come on, lets go for a drink.
Jimmy nodded again
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OK, but just one to try and shift this head-ache. And no tequila!
As they gathered their things together and left Jimmy looked out of the window one last time... he had been so sure it was Robyn, that his eyes were not playing tricks on him. But he also knew the horrible truth, no matter how much he pushed it to the back of his mind. He would never see Robyn again, she died on the gallows nearly 800 years ago and there was nothing he could do to change that fact.
One single tear rolled down his face as he turned off the office light and closed the door.
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MJStark
03-31-2012, 02:58 AM
So folks, I know things have slowed right down on here in the last few weeks, this was due to working like a bitch while my boss got his holiday taken at work. I was due to say today that things will pick up again now...
But I'm afraid not. My wife has been offered a really good job in Brighton (she didn't even need to interview for it, simpley enquired about the job and got offered it on the spot!). Now, moving to Brighton has been our vague plan for a number of years so having this fall into our laps is kind of a dream come true :D
The job starts in less than a month and we've got to move home, get our son in a decent school there and generally get the stuff we've collected over 10 years in a 3 bedroom house with massive shed (my wife is a hoarder lol) down to the amount of stuff you can fit into a moderately sized 2 bedrom appartment while still working to pay the bills until we leave :rolleyes:
So I'm afraid fans of Robyn and Jimmy will have to wait a while for the conclusion of their stories. I'm going to try and get both to the final issue of this volume (one away each) but after than it will be after we get ourselves sorted in a new place 270odd miles away that I will stike up the continuing story.
Many thanks for reading folks and, trust me, just like Arnie, I'll be back ;)
MJStark
04-30-2012, 10:05 AM
So, my desktop died big-time just before the big move and I lost all the data for my diaries and the I+verse Middle Ages Add-On mod I was doing. Sorry about that folks.
If anyone is interested I could continue the story in a similar style to the 'wiki-entry' style used by others on the board for diaries, but I don't have any of the data left to continue the diary in full at this time.
Let me know folks. I should be able to continue it properly at some point, but I'll be honest and say that when I can I'll be starting from a point a volume ahead of where we are now (due to personal choise, nothing more. The Jimmy/Roberta saga gets more interesting and less angsty from that point)
And check out the Robyn diary if you want a really shortened version of the final issue that never was ;)
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